Everyone says its hard to forget your first love. I would agree to it a billion times. My first love will always be there in my heart throughout this lifetime. I may get married to some girl one day, but I'll never forget my first love. I don't remember exactly I saw her for the first time nor do i remember when I fell in love with her. But I can say one thing for sure that she is the most beautiful and the most exiting thing that has ever happened to me. I still remember those days in my childhood where the only thing I used to do was think about her all day and loose concentration in my 'studies'. Times when the only thing that mattered in my life was she, my first love. There are people who like her and there are people who hate her. But I promise you my love that I ll never stop loving you. Never ever in my life will I forget you. She changed my life for better. She made my evenings exiting. She gave me the sweetest of the dreams. I could spend days without food but I couldn't spend a day without thinking about her. I watched her grow in front of me. I watched her blossom in front of me. After years and years of love for her, I had to go away from her. The inundating pressure of academic excellence from all part of the society forced me to go away from her, a decision which I still regret. Am sorry for that my love. But I want you to know that I ll always be there for you. My first love, CRICKET.....!!!!!
Lol!! Good one!! I really din have a clue!!
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ReplyDeletegood attempt da. the whole thing was plain and usual except the climax which brought the needed effect!
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DeleteLove !! good job though .. "She" certainly made many evenings exiting ..n thanks to our SIP season that we could spend so much time with her ...
ReplyDeleteshe sure did...!!!
Deletenice one.....i really thought it to be a girl...but u were awesome at expressing it...."a nice Googly by you"...:)
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ReplyDeleteNice..well done.
There are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Try to avoid that.